Here is the plan section with material, inhabitation, and trees. I'm having a problem trying to figure out how to section it onto paper. So my question is how should i go about framing it for the page, and is there anything I'm missing or anything that should be changed. Thanks, zach. Oh one more thing...how do i show this cut line on a plan?
Thursday, 11 June 2009
Need Some Help
Here is the plan section with material, inhabitation, and trees. I'm having a problem trying to figure out how to section it onto paper. So my question is how should i go about framing it for the page, and is there anything I'm missing or anything that should be changed. Thanks, zach. Oh one more thing...how do i show this cut line on a plan?
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Hi Zach- I think in general the plan looks good- but there are some things you can do to improve it:
• Inhabitation: At the moment you don't give anything away about how this space is used- windows, ledges, doorways, furniture etc.
• Framing: crop the top and bottom of the drawing- there are not helping you to describe the atmosphere- the drawing current currently peters out but could be contained and capture everything within
• Trees/ context: get out that brush tool! where are the different leaf types?
• Annotation: describe activities, materials, qualities, thicknesses, build-ups etc.
Thanks for posting- see you tomorrow- Jonathan
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